Well done partner! I was reading faster and faster, and I knew something bad was going to happen to Brendan but I didn't think he would die. The worst part was how the media portrayed the reason for his death, a complete lie. You did it again...you made me feel like this was a true story. That is a compliment by the way.
Thanks partner. Glad you liked it. It was a fun exercise though frustrating at times.
I would need to have a lot of free time to attempt this one.