Art Explained By A Writer: Musikstund (1897)

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Okay, this is what we’ll do. As you know, history repeats itself. We’ll do the same thing the Von Trapp family did in The Sound of Music. Did you see that film?

"We’re not going to perform, are we?" As you know, I absolutely can’t sing, and The Full Monty isn’t for me either.

"Come on, James, you’ve got a hot body—don’t be so childish," says Oliver while jokingly, and the men laugh their heads off.

James looks aggrieved. He has no idea what’s so funny and thinks of what his mother said: Don’t worry, boy—he who laughs last, laughs best.

"Frits, you buy the tickets. No, boy, not online—just at the counter, so you have an alibi," says Magnus, pouring the last bit of red wine into his glass. He peers inside to see if the last drop has really leaked out. What a pity you can’t wring out a bottle like that, he thinks. That was possible in the Heinz tomato ketchup advert on TV back in the day—and that bottle was made of glass, wasn’t it?

He sits thoughtfully at the table on the terrace, no longer paying attention to what the others are spending. He’d rather think about Katrien and listen to Vivaldi. What was that piece called again? It had something to do with pizza—four cheeses, but something different. In his mind, he watches the leaves fall from the trees. Is it winter already? Where’s this wind suddenly coming from? The radio says the wind is blowing from Antarctica. He doesn’t feel like going to that concert, but just like the Von Trapps, something good has to come out of this evening.

When evening comes, the men sit in the theatre hall, listening to music most of them don’t really like. But you have to do something when the police knock on your front door to drag you out of the house, accompanied by a group of soldiers.

"Sir," James whistles, "your phone keeps flashing—did you forget to turn it off? Those flashes hurt my eyes, and that buzzing is annoying. I can’t enjoy the music like this. Could you put that thing on aeroplane mode, please?"

What are those two up to? Frits wonders. I mustn’t forget to ask them for the money for their tickets—I’m not a philanthropist, and the family needs to eat if I don’t come home. I’ve got a strong head if this ends well. That James isn’t exactly a genius either. We should never have raided the ATMs, but now it’s too late. Who actually left that loot where? And where’s Wilhelm?

Suddenly, the fire alarm goes off. The guests look surprised. The lights go out, loud bangs echo through the hall, and when they come back on, it’s a bloodbath. The stage curtain hangs limp. Vivaldi plays his final notes, and the gentlemen’s musical hour—now dissolved into thin air—is over

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Painting: Musikstund (1897) - public domain
Painter: Magnus Enckell (1870–1925)
The contest "Art & Writing" is hosted by @solperez


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The family needs to eat, they talk and talk, they rob an ATM, in conclusion they do NOT enjoy anything at all hahaha, maybe it is like that in real life, people who cause harm are never happy

Let's say it might give a kick but next starts the worrying and the question: can I trust my mates?

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Asaltaron a los cajeros automáticos de un banco y planearon ir al concierto de Vivaldi para no llamar la atención del robo. Pero, ¿qué explotó? y ese baño de sangre era real o era ketchup? Quizás me toque llamar a un detective para saber cómo se dieron los hechos en realidad, y encarcelar a los culpable, jeje. @wakeupkitty era una espectadora o se encontraba en el escenario? Dónde estaba la gatita, que ahora cuenta todo con lujos de detalle? Jeje.

Me encantó leerte. Gracias por estar. Un abrazo.

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yo no se nada, fue @almaguer con su NUDED IN RED - yo ni siquiera guardo un diario.... ¿quizás sean las notas del correo de la botella? si te sobra un detective avísame, puede ser útil, pero lo lógico es que Dylan no lo sepa.

There weren't even breasts in the scene. I feel that the translator has ripped me off again. Some considerations would be necessary, if the scenes taken, were very hot. Or, failing that, some stove lit. The language was straight out of one of those mid-century gangster movies. No significant laws had been passed about identity or equality (social or gender, it matters little). It was more the story of a tobacco-twisting peasant. Being betrayed. I should now write either a preface, or a funeral obituary.
Company will always be pleasant if you're around. @wakeupkitty y @solperez

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Lo maravilloso de Steemit y de los traductores es que hay una historia uno (la que escribiste) y otra la que se traduce; aparte de la que el lector se crea en la mente, jeje. ¿No te parece esto genial?

What do you mean no breasts? Did you add that picture blindfolded?

I like to hear the title of that film. 😎

Anyway, sex is sex, no romance, unwanted children and nasty old men plus blue eyes did it. One breast or two breasts, it's fine with me.

Wjy was the tobacco-twisting peasant betrayed? Because he had his pants at his knees?

If you make a puzzle out of the obituary the detective has something to break his brains - good distraction. Don't forget the potatoes!

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#wewrite & #comment but only because it is you. 😉

Jajaja. Entonces convoquemos a @almaguer para que declare y esclarezca el asunto, jajaja.

From chatting very often with me, discussing setbacks and visions of all kinds, from different latitudes, he has become detailed. He swims with a goldsmith's precision. I wonder the same thing?

Where was the kitty, who now tells everything with luxurious detail? Hehe

Love to both of you. Have a nice weekend.
@wakeupkitty y @solperez

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Jajaja. Bueno, ya sabes que los gatos son muy curiosos; y por lo visto, este que se llama @wakeupkitty no le gusta ir más allá de lo evidente, jajaja.

You know what we say?

Het smoesje is goed, maar het praatje deugt niet!

🤣

Jajaja

My gosh, is it weekend again! 🤯

Me parece una idea excelente...