Pentagon Garden? What a strange name for camping. As I understand you could rent a tent and didn't have to take one along which is easy if you don' thave one. To me your story is long enough and if you write a bit more info and add some prices (also in Steem) and change the title in something attractive you can pin this post in the SteemAtlas. Did you know that?
You can always edit your post to make it look better and also use the hashtag #travel

If it comes to your text it's long enough for me.