A Motivational Story From Hardwork to Success

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I am Muhammad Ahmad from Pakistan

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Once upon a time their was a boy who was very kind hearted carrying and having a positive identity.He was the eldest son of his parents.Musa belongs from poor family, having high dreams.His father was a fruit sellerand from this money he was fulfilling the expenditures of his kids education.Musa siblings were in class prep and class 2.He was in 9 Standard.He want to be a CSS officer and for this, he was working hard but the people in his village were a;ways bothering him that you are a son of fruitseller and you cant do anything just wasting your father money on this studies.

But Musa always get a motivation from their talks and works hard.He always say to his father that one day I will be a successful person and then I will give all the relief to you that you actually and truly deserve.One day Musa father was selling fruits and then suddenly one car hits hi,.When Musa know this, he reached their and his father just see him and closed his eyes.

Thus Musa lost his father.This was verve breaking for Musa and his siblings but he had to act wisely because his siblings was not dependent on him.So Musa was deeply thinking that what should I do, I cant quit my studies and thus I also need money for Education and for house grocery etc.

Musa Decided that in the Morning I will go to school and in the evening I will be selling fruiots. So Musa exactly did this, he was working hard day and night.The behavous of villagers were rudely towards him.After sime years, Musa successfully became a CSS officer and all the villagers were just surprised and they were ashamed and asking for forgiveness,

He has also make a big fruitshopin the Mall by his father name.He also free the Education, uniform and stationary expenditures for those who cant afford it because Education is a strong weopon towards success and every child has a right to get education.

Moral

Education is the Key to Success.

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 13 days ago 

It was nice to read your story, it has a beautiful message. And it is written fluently. Some details to my consideration that could be improved.
As very specific details:

preparatory class and class 2.

And the break of the narrative time, it is a story with a very broad theme, which you are condensing. In narrative everything is precise. It's a crystal goldsmith. Every part is there, because otherwise the structure collapses.
Don't stop writing. Welcome to the community.