A poem about friendship.

in Freewriters8 hours ago (edited)

Hello friends, good morning everyone. Today I'd like to try to write a poem. I hope it goes well.

Friendship is a wonderful thing and it's good for us all.
Friends help us, teach us, and support us at all times.
They don't leave us aside, but rather accompany us at all times.
That's why we should appreciate the friends we have and the people who love us. That's why friendship isn't just a person, but something so great that with each gesture of kindness, it grows and grows. We should value it.
Just as I do with each one of you. Every message of encouragement from a new person is a new friend speaking to us.
That's why friendship is such a wonderful thing, because without it we couldn't live.
It's a fundamental and essential part of a person's life.

Well, friends, I hope you like it and that it went well. See you.

Here's a photo from Pixabay where you can see some friends.

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Friends, I've added several jastags to this post to test them. If anyone knows what they're about, please let me know.

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It is good to see you give poetry a try. To start with it's easier and more fun to write than to read.

When you write a poem it is good to try not to use the same words over and over again, to evoke a certain feeling and to keep a rhythm. What is the feeling that you experience with real friendship? Can you convey that.

I am curious about what your next poem will be.

Hashtags

1 #freewrite (not freewriters) - your text is a freewrite which means that you have not thought extensively about what you are going to write.
2 #burnsteem25 - an internal hashtag that certainly does not belong among the first 4 and is pointless in itself because everyone can see whether you burn 25% of your rewards. You do not do that so this means: hashtag abuse! which is not appreciated.
3 #steemexclusive - an internal hashtag. You indicate with this that you have not posted this piece anywhere else. Does it make sense to use this hashtag? I don't think so because anyone who wants to know if this is true will definitely check if this is the case and you are not lying (the same goes for using AI and plagiarism)
4 #friends - external hashtag that relates to the subject of your post - makes sense and belongs among the first 4 hashtags
5 #poem: external hashtag - if what you are writing is a poem then you use this hashtag

In your case you could use the following hashtags for this freewrite in this order:
#freewrite #poem #friends (or #friendship) #relationships

With these hashtags you would say: give me a freewrite, a poem about friend/friendship/relationships

Hashtags like: steemexclusive, burnsteem25, clubstatus, country are all intern hashtags and don't belong among the first 4. Why the first 4? Because Steemit makes a huges difference if it comes to be found. Not all hashtags counts as heavy.

Thanks for explaining the hashtags to me. I had a lot of doubts about that. Next time, I'll try to perfect the writing of the poem so it turns out better. Now that I know a little more about hashtags, I'll put the appropriate ones.

I'm going to edit the post and add the hashtags you told me to.

Thanks, you've helped me a lot. I've already changed the hashtags on the poem post. I'm thinking about making another one, but I'll improve this one a bit.

You are welcome