The Big Heart!

in Freewriters21 days ago

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It's been a while I wrote a poem, so I decided to do this little freestyle for today's prompt.

He cared for all,
His life was always on the line for others,
A big heart he's got,
He was loved by all for his sacrifices,
A saviour to the troubled,
Now we can sleep easy,
Now we can rest on someone,
Someone dependable,
The biggest heart I have seen on my lifetime.

Thank you for your time...

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 20 days ago 

It's a nice poem. While reading, several people came to mind just on part was missing 'being loved by all'. Kind of bitter if you consider all the sacrifices.

Another thought: how will those who sleep sound and safely learn to take care of themselves?

Thanks.

They will never learn as far as their saviour is always close by. Their trust is on him for everything.

 19 days ago 

If that is true they would always feel happy and smile from the heart. Strangely enough I never see that. Is trust just a word to fool yourself with and make one feel better?

Trust is more than a word, it is real and I have witnessed it. I guess you've not found someone you can really trust.

 18 days ago 

Trust is personal. It is the personal faith you put in someone. I did and do that since my entire lufe and indeed if it comes to the end result not one of those people was worth it. Goodness, kindness is heavily abused.

A good Sunday.

True!
But I have learnt not to give up because some folks are not worth our trust, it will rob those that are trustworthy of our deepest attention.
We keep being who we are, whether people appreciate it or not. That's their problem.
We simply should not change because of people's lack of gratitude.