Outburst: 5mins freewrite
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A pressure builds up from within,
A great wind held up in a closed space,
Waiting and gathering energy to be free.
It keeps piling up, waiting for the right trigger,
To unleash an outburst of emotions,
Uncontrollable feelings, a release of pain,
A moment of relief and a moment of joy.
The joy's a jailbreak, one cherished by all,
One I seek to give to all who are broken-hearted,
Lost in despair, let laughter and happiness fill you up,
Be glad and be strong; the journey's not easy, but we must get through.
Thanks for viewing 🫶 🫶
It started good, but in the next part, it felt like you are in a rush to finish the freewrite/poem. Did you do that on purpose>
Yeah,
My head just went blank at some point, and I didn't know what to write next😩.
If your head wents blank and you didn't know what to write you write: I don't know what to write and how should I fill the last minutes when that clock keept ticking,,, and so on and so on,
That's how the daily freewriting works. It's not important what you write but that you write under all circumstances and fight the writer's block. Who knows what your brain comes up with and whatever you wrote can make a good draft for something else.
Thanks for the reminder.
I'll also take Ezun1's advice to heart and stop limiting myself to what I think I can do perfectly. Sometimes, starting imperfectly is the best way to learn and grow.
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I can tell you it is and if you try it it's not easy at all. I started an ugly sketchbook.. same principle
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