Steemit Challenge S26-w2| Mysterious Roommate

in #fiction-s26wk213 hours ago
Hello !

My dear steemian fellows! I am @syedabatool from Pakistan 🇵🇰. Today I participate in the contest that is organized by "@dove11".The topic of contest that is "Steemit Challenge S26-w2| Mysterious Roommate".so, without wastage of time let's start.

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When Ronnie first came to live with Timothy, he seemed like a very confident young man. He told Timothy that he had come to the city with big dreams. His plan was to start an export-import business. Since starting a business in a new place was costly, he decided to share a room with Timothy to save money.

Ronnie had a very polite way of speaking and always dressed smartly. Timothy was impressed and wanted to help him settle in the new city. He guided Ronnie about places, markets, and business rules. The two quickly became good friends.

One evening, Timothy returned to their room and saw Ronnie sitting on the floor with a bag pulled out from under his bed. Inside the bag were some tools iron cutters, saws, a bunch of keys, drills, a small gun, and even a magnifying glass. Timothy was shocked. He thought, “Why would a businessman need such things? This looks suspicious.”

For a few days, Timothy silently observed Ronnie. But soon, the truth came out in an unexpected way.

Ronnie finally shared his secret: before starting his business, he was volunteering with a rescue and safety group. These tools were not for crime, but for helping people in emergencies. The cutters and saws were used to open blocked doors or free people from accidents.

The bunch of keys belonged to old locked places that his team had to open while rescuing. The small gun was not a real weapon it was a signal gun, used for alerting in case of danger. The magnifying glass and drills were part of his work in identifying weak spots in buildings.

Ronnie admitted that he didn’t tell Timothy earlier because he feared people might misunderstand him. His real plan was to combine his rescue skills with his business dream. He wanted to import safety equipment and export useful tools to places where people needed them most.

Hearing this, Timothy felt proud. The roommate he once doubted was actually a kind and brave person. Ronnie wasn’t living a double life as a spy or thief he was someone trying to make the world safer.

From then on, Timothy supported Ronnie even more. Their friendship grew stronger, built not just on sharing a room, but on trust, respect, and a shared dream to do something meaningful.

Conclusion

Truth about Ronnie in simple words: Ronnie was not a criminal. He kept tools for rescue and safety work. His dream was to start a business in safety equipment to help people.

I invite my friends to participate in this engagement challenge

@josepha and @jyoti-thelight and @paholags and @hudamalik20

With best wishes 🌸

@syedabatool

Good Bye Steemit Family 👋
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Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate

Dear @syedabatool, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.5/3
Presentation0.8/1
My observation0.7/1
Total8/10

Feedback

  • Your idea was good but you kept the story too short and ended it before it took off,

  • You started with an intro and were short on words required.

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Thanks for your review

¡Holaaa amigo!🤗

Que labor tan linda llevaba a cabo Ronnie y, lo que más me encanta de su secreto es que, no lo hacía para ganar prestigio, sino, por bondad auténtica, siendo esta una particularidad que aprecio mucho de quienes ayudan sin ventilarlo.

Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica... Un fuerte abrazo💚

Thanks for stopping here and leaving a valuable feedback

Hi friend. Good Story. One doesn't judge the people by their look. Ronnie was a good guy.

Yes offcourse I always engage everyone in a positive way like I see in a positive way ✨