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RE: Love Beyond Boundaries: The Tale of a Vampire and a Fairy
Hi!
For me, it reads at first a little clumsy, but in reading further, I got the idea:
Each paragraph is a summarizing of a chapter (or more) in an extended novel. You have put your story line here, and now I'm curious to read one of the outlined chapters.
Please! Give me, give us some probe of the story with all its details and dialogues!
;-)
And if the real ending is more like Romeo's and Julia's, then try to let the readers be part of the tragedy.
I'm really happy that my story got your interest, I'm still an amature writer with lot of soft spots for my emotions.
I'm recovering myself and I need some time, so currently I'm not brave enough to tell the entire story, sorry.
But I'll definitely come with a new story in the near future.
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