A Meeting With Myself – Part 1steemCreated with Sketch.

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You were breathing,
But since when did being alive become tiring?
I asked myself – and I started crying.
There was no voice, just something broken from the corner of the heart said –
"You kept smiling at everyone,
But kept swallowing your own tears.
You belonged to everyone,
And became a stranger within yourself."

"When did this chasm form between me and myself?"
I asked in a trembling voice.
The voice inside replied —
"When you listened to everyone else,
but silenced your own scream."


I stayed silent...
No courage left to speak.
Then the wounds of my past appeared —
they said, "We are your story.
You always ran from us,
never even tried to understand…
We didn't break you,
we taught you how to stand."


I asked, with shaking hope —
"Am I still worthy of forgiveness?"
A faint smile rose from within, wordless but complete —
"You fell, you wandered, you shattered — but you’re still you.
Forgiveness was never the question…
You just need to hold yourself again —
All your battles were with yourself."


And then, for the first time, I held myself —
Like an orphaned child clinging to his own shadow.
No complaints, no regrets.
Just a silence… filled with peace.
And from that silence, a new morning rose —
Where I was no longer
a reflection of someone else,
but the light of my own soul.



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Author: @krishna768 | Date: 10-July-2025 | Achievement 1


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I like the style to talk about finding oneself. It's deeply poetic.