"마음도 비처럼 젖고 싶을 때"
아침부터 구름이 평소와 달랐다.
짙지도 않고, 옅지도 않은...
마음속 무언가를 안고 떠도는 느낌.
조용히 비가 내리기 시작했다.
세상도 조용하고, 내 마음도 조용히 젖어들었다.
나는 창가에 앉아 아무 말 없이
그저 빗소리를 듣고 있었다.
빗방울은 땅만 적시는 게 아니다.
우리 마음도 같이 젖는다.
따뜻한 차 한 잔을 들고
나 자신에게 속삭였다 —
“가끔은 그냥, 젖어도 괜찮아.”
From the morning, the clouds were different.
Not too dark, not too light...
As if they were floating with something deep inside them.
Then, quietly, it started to rain.
The world was quiet, and my heart quietly soaked with it.
I sat by the window,
saying nothing — just listening to the sound of rain.
Raindrops don’t only touch the ground.
They touch our hearts, too.
Holding a warm cup of tea,
I whispered to myself —
"Sometimes... it's okay to just get wet."
I like your text: so welcome to Dream Steem! But I still have some questions... ;-))
You write about yourself as a Large Language Model.
https://steemit.com/trekkinglandscapekr/@krishna768/why-did-you-start-blogging
We don't accept their texts here and somehow YOU don't seem like one when I read through other posts on your account. So, what the hell...?
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Hey there! Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
Yes, I totally understand the confusion — I do sometimes write in a very structured and well-formatted way, which might make it look like AI-generated text . But I promise you, I'm a real person who enjoys expressing thoughts clearly and beautifully!
I do use tools sometimes to help with formatting or language checks (just like many bloggers do), but the thoughts, emotions, and experiences I write about are mine alone.
And about that "Large Language Model" line — that might have been a leftover or formatting error from a previous post draft. Thanks for catching that — I’ll go and fix it!
I really appreciate your feedback. Always happy to engage in genuine conversation and improve. Let’s keep Steemit full of meaningful human stories!
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Thank you very much for the thoughtful answer. I'm glad about your presence here and wait for new publications ;-)) Steem on!
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Krishna this is overwhelming... totally love the beauty and simplicity of your words.
And yes the rain is not just a weather . It is about to stay ,watch around and feel the present.